Beach Glass
All the kids say there’s nothing
here, no future. They wait
for escape, their breath
held, muscles tense, ready
to spring like racehorses
from a gate.
But it takes leaving to see
a place clearly,
weathering and time.
One day they’ll long for home,
find themselves missing
the way marram grass pokes
straight up through sand,
the scorch of a bare foot
descending a dune.
Maybe they’ll want for the dark
waves churning
jagged shards of glass
in the surf, broken bits
bound to return, washed
ashore once again, this time,
with all their edges smooth.
12 thoughts on "Beach Glass"
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Interesting that I too used the race horse analogy today! I love the metaphor of smoothing away the sharp edges for adulthood. Yes, life does often use friction to smooth our sharp edges. Wonderful poem!
Really good poem. You captured my attention in the first verse. So true and very well written.
Truth and beauty – Thank you!
But it takes leaving to see
a place clearly, oh yes!
Always you must leave to realize what you had. Truth, Chelsea.
Dang that’s beautiful writing. So nice to read you again.
Bill, I think it is actually the first poem I have written since last LexPoMo! Seriously glad this exists because it drew me back. Hoping to write a few! I miss writing, and y’all!
leaving to see – had me there and always a pleasure Chelsie!
Beautiful language or transformation. Beach glass is such a powerful image.
Great title and incredible voicing for a poem that all us old people know. ” Beach Glass ”
Yup.
Nice to see your writing again Chelsie
Yup, the title, the sprouting, the tumbled edges of the glass. Beautiful metaphors.
Touching! And such a great ending.
That last stanza really artfully says it all. Great writing here. Love “bound to return,/…/with all their edges smooth.”