Birddog
[Poet’s note: No, I’m not a hunter. No birds were harmed, but I dearly love English setters, and Blossom was a remarkable girl, a wonderful companion who exhibited the instincts of setters.]
Blossom, my setter, takes a point
sharp as a blade
and blazes in inchoate passion —
a thoroughbred in the starting gate.
Doubt has no place here.
She knows where quail hunch
in autumn’s wheat stubble.
Her nose, ears and flank twitch,
register the scent of prey.
A chilled breeze riffles
her feathered legs and tail.
She trembles with savage restraint.
The sharp blast of a whistle releases her.
This white-hot meteor hurls the covey skyward.
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Great imagery. Enjoyed your poem.
Beautiful tribute to your companion! Good to read your words again this year.
Yes! I actually did grow up hunting. And seeing a dog lock on point is one of the most magical things in world. Beautiful imagery and a submittable work.
Bravo poet.
You had me at:
Blossom, my setter, takes a point
sharp as a blade
and blazes in inchoate passion —
a thoroughbred in the starting gate.
Fire lines, especially the last one! Shew!