Birddog
[Poet’s note: No, I’m not a hunter. No birds were harmed, but I dearly love English setters, and Blossom was a remarkable girl, a wonderful companion who exhibited the instincts of setters.]
Blossom, my setter, takes a point
sharp as a blade
and blazes in inchoate passion —
a thoroughbred in the starting gate.
Doubt has no place here.
She knows where quail hunch
in autumn’s wheat stubble.
Her nose, ears and flank twitch,
register the scent of prey.
A chilled breeze riffles
her feathered legs and tail.
She trembles with savage restraint.
The sharp blast of a whistle releases her.
This white-hot meteor hurls the covey skyward.
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Great imagery. Enjoyed your poem.
Thank you!
Beautiful tribute to your companion! Good to read your words again this year.
Thank you so much, and backatcha! I haven’t taken the time to look at statistics, but we have significant participation this year and wonderful words! I’m having trouble already with getting through all of the poem for one day. LoL
Yes! I actually did grow up hunting. And seeing a dog lock on point is one of the most magical things in world. Beautiful imagery and a submittable work.
Bravo poet.
Thank you so much, Coleman!
You had me at:
Blossom, my setter, takes a point
sharp as a blade
and blazes in inchoate passion —
a thoroughbred in the starting gate.
Thank you, Pam!
Fire lines, especially the last one! Shew!
Ooohhh, thank you, Shaun!
Blossom does seem like a most remarkable girl! Thank you so much for sharing this. 💕
You’re welcome, and thank you for your comment. Blossom is long gone, and I miss her still.