Hard Lessons
More days than most I fail to thank
the world for being just as it is,
stubborn as patches of kudzu,
unforgiving as the snapper
at the bottom of the pond,
lessons carried into meetings
with bank managers, or my wife
when I feel compelled to tell her that she’s wrong.
I’ve learned so much about injustice,
the convincing threat of a cruel hand,
how to separate the slow and stupid
from money, make an ashtray of white sand.
That the wounded make easy prey,
little bunnies breed so frequently
to produce enough high-protein progeny
to keep apex predators fat and happy.
There are those who delight in seeing others fail,
one gust of wind and the circus tent collapses,
one loose screw and the rocket explodes,
too much hubris and the sub implodes.
It’ll take the fall into that cold, dark abyss,
before I’m grateful for everything I’ll miss.
16 thoughts on "Hard Lessons"
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The metaphors and imagery in this poem really shine. Another Bill Brymer winner.
This is such a good one! Well done w/ the form, too.
Gonna geek on this one.
You are so talented.
What bot hof them said and the metrics and the rhyme scheme,
Love the first to second stanza break. Concepted and executed perfectly.
Love the sub reference and the couplet to end it.
wow
last stanza brings ir home.
you turn the personal into the universal,
the hard lessons of self reflection
The darkness of “high protein progeny” hammers home your point ruthlessly. Powerful and, of course, well done!
So well done. Some of my favorite lines were:
“stubborn as patches of kudzu, / unforgiving as the snapper” // at the bottom of the pond,”
Congratulations on your book coming out from Accents Publishing!
Dark magic here, Bill. Your ventures into formalism are paying off bigly.
One thing: Could there be more rhymes iin the first two stanzas, along the lines of the delicious ones elsewhere in the poem?
Beautiful beautiful poem and so descriptive of life
Bill. WOW! Where to begin?! The rhythm, the tension, all of it. I was particularly struck by:
“That the wounded make easy prey,
little bunnies breed so frequently
to produce enough high-protein progeny
to keep apex predators fat and happy.”
What a write.
the idea of breeding have no point in nature except death – what a signature!
Whew!
stubborn as patches of kudzu
how to separate the slow and stupid
from money,
Yessss:
one loose screw and the rocket explodes,
too much hubris and the sub implodes.
This is such a strong, honest poem. I really connected with the kudzu and snapper metaphors, and that closing line about falling into the abyss before finding gratitude really hit me. You captured those hard lessons beautifully.
Oh, Bill, what a lesson in how to write the hard stuff! Danger, Will Robinson! Now I’m going to go smell some roses.
Gosh this is wonderful esp the stanza from wounded to apex predators, and these are hard lessons and so sad. Thanks, friend.
Love your images woven with profound thoughts.
I love this. Sitting with the wisdom of “More days than most I fail to thank/the world for being just as it is”