Matrilineal Roux
I never knew Aunt Matile since she was murdered
by her lover & who also shot her husband dead.
I wandered too. Tried to be loyal & compliant
but when my husband cheated first, I got even
by carrying on with a necklace of men.
The wild streak comes from my mother’s side.
It sparkles our blood with rhinestones.
It tinges our coffee with steamed milk & chicory.
My great-grandmother taught my grandmother
how to stir up a gumbo with shrimp & andouille.
She started by making a roux with peanut oil & flour.
When the sauce was the color of pecans,
she added it to the stew. When I was in my twenties
I began collecting vintage dresses. My favorite
was decorated with tiny glass beads
& then I remembered how Aunt Odette’s closet
was filled with beaded silk sheaths from the Jazz Age.
My grandmother kept a delicate chemise in her top
drawer. My husband marvels at my fascination
with haute couture while my sister loves Paris.
I almost hate to tell you how the women
in my family enjoy boozing though I would rarely
use words like lush or sot to describe us.
It’s just that we have that wild French streak
that runs through our blood like a spiced roux.
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Wonderful — love the various women we meet through your vivid writing. Especially fond of “sparkles our blood with rhinestones”.
Almost feels like a list poem and then it’s a recipe then a Confessional ode.
Thibodaux dna in the house.
Love it and that Bryant weave in full twist.
That’s a high bar. ❤️
Nice! The opening lines definitely caught my attention, and I love how you brought it back to the roux at the end!
This is incredible. My favorite lines:
“It sparkles our blood with rhinestones.
It tinges our coffee with steamed milk & chicory. ”
This poem is rich with imagery and the mood lingers after reading. Thanks for sharing.
your poetry ROUX
is always tasty
Wonderful title. Learned a new word “Matrilineal.” Love it!
I’m stealing Jim Lally’s comment: “your poetry ROUX
is always tasty”
And congratulations on your book coming out from Accents Publishing!
I am not saying this just because I am French… Everything about this poem speaks to me. I love how it engages all our senses, You make us taste the sweetness of letting all go… But the food and everything still worth savoring, including the “necklace of men”. The sassy French in your milk line are proud, aucun doute.
Will you be my long lost cousin? Come over for lunch?
I, too, love “necklace of men” in this rich poem
First line grabs the reader with the word murder. Lots of good lines, great overall theme with images that braid lots of strands of meaning together. Great poem!
You don’t want to know where “necklace of men” takes me… 😉
Seriously, though, this is a tasty poem in more ways than one. Made me think about making a big pot of red beans and rice.
Btw the hint of rhyme in “chicory / andouille” made me wonder if you could introduce more rhymes here and there. They could be lagniappes in this flavorful stew.
You take us on a rich journey with you!
Salute every line repeated by others here, Plus “I almost hate to tell you… ” (What a prompt!)
Such exciting words, and I love the jump from the recipe to the vintage dresses
so many pretty phrases Linda – I enjoy the connected feeling I get between the necklace of men and the rhinestones blood
The wild streak comes from my mother’s side.
It sparkles our blood with rhinestones.
It tinges our coffee with steamed milk & chicory.
The Compression here is so good. I love ” The wild streak comes from my mother’s side./It sparkles our blood with rhinestones.” and a recipe for the roux!