Courtship at the Insect’s Garden Club Ball
The ladybug arrived in red, of course—black spots
like sequins. Ladybug had read the invite twice
and dressed to match the brief, not knowing red
was the one thing its body knew how to weep.
The mantis came in green—swept Ladybug
straight from wallflower. They danced the way
you dance when someone’s watching from the balcony:
tucked, calibrated, small talk pitched to the room.
Ladybug practiced in the mirror for a week.
The mantis clinked a dewdrop flute all night,
bent the stem toward certain guests before they landed
and away from others—nothing heavy-handed.
Ladybug was good at being held.
Mantis kept his hands in the position of prayer
even while dancing, even while he praised their
multitudinous eyes. The band began playing
something slow. They circled round,
Mantis and Ladybug a blur. The balcony agreed
they made a lovely pair. Mantis asked Ladybug to hold
of a thank-you note—and when the mantis lowered
his mouth to throat—the Ladybug went on saying so,
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The dew drop flute is so creative Shaun. So much tension comes from the ambiguity at the end, well done!
Thank you, Jeremy!
This is masterful, Shaun! The images of this pairing, the way you truly set a scene for us is incredible!
Thank you! This was a kind of a happy experiment!
Yeah poet, !!! So much talent in the rhyme and off and beat and language……
“He leaned in close like the last line of a song*
Even mantis prays 😀
Thanks, Coleman! Praying–or rubbing its hands together!
Wow! This is tense.
Thanks you, S!
a macabre ball of love and death,(murder really) watched over by whole gang, .combination of romeo & juliette and animal farm.
Exquisite
Thank you so much, Jim. I aspire to write it the way you described it
Love this one, too, Shaun.
Setting and scene, man ❤️
Thanks, Joseph. It was a fun and new sort of thing for me to try!
So creative, Shaun! I, too, love the dewdrop flute.
Thank you Nancy! 🥂
Disney meets Poe by way of Jane Austen. The ending made me shiver.
I love your description! Inspires me to think about revising it as a broadside
in the tradition of Aesop
Thank you. Love that–by way of David Rakoff
Oh wow, I love this! Juicy and fun and eerie. So good.
Thank you Kayla!
I loved this! Illustration styles of characters from antique children’s books came to life in my head..This is such a rich with imagery poem and suspenseful too. Strangely I felt a soundtrack was going as i read too…and I smiled several times with surprise. Thank you for this!
Thank you so much, Ann! It’s gratifying that you enjoyed it in that way. I had a sort of illustration image in mind!
Love, love, love this one. A few fav lines:
The ladybug arrived in red, of course—black spots
like sequins.
The mantis clinked a dewdrop flute all night,
Thank you Pam! 🐞
I agree with Pam. You’ve outdone yourself this time, Shaun
Thank you! It’s definitely an attempt
out of my comfort zone
Ummm, yes! This is awesome. Dark and whimsical at the same time. And like all the others said, I, too, love the dewdrop flute.
Thank you Chelsie! Art deco whimsigoth!
Absolutely delightful with a bit of a shiver! Kevin’s description is a wonderful elevator pitch!
Thank you Sylvia! I see Kevin’s vision, love a little curated anthology of Disney meets Poe/Austen/& co.
You really brought the scene and the characters to life. Delightful and chilling at the same time.
Thank you, Karen!
What a world to step into. I love a ball and I love anthropomorphics
Thanks so much, River!
So cute and beautiful making this executioner moment into a romantic dance. Oh man…
I was thinking like: dark art deco bug ball! Thank you!