A Fairy Tale
The girl runs up and down the stairs with ease.
Her granny says do this, do that for me.
The girl brings folded laundry up the stairs,
returns with orders for the broom and pan.
Now don’t forget the corners and the nooks,
her ancient voice a slither down the stairs,
be sure to clean that closet out real good
and when you finish that there’s more up here—
her voice— a craggy marker for the girl,
a stone she cannot move but always hears.
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I like how the lines sound as I read through them–a good rhythm. The emphasis on granny’s voice is also really compelling.
thanks!
I like how the ending has an “ever after” quality to it, though not a happy one! Also, the voice as “a slither down the stairs” is memorable.
“slither” gives granny’s voice a creepy quality. good word
So much movement in this poem. Granny’s voice says it all.
Those grannies—it was always something, wasn’t it? And thank goodness.
Love the last line
Damn.
This is “built” craft with craftsmanship.
The diction and word lengths. The concrete images.
Thank goodness for Magick and Possibility.
Appreciate the empathy for our Cinderella. Wow.
I love the personification and esses of “a slither down the stairs”