Flint
(watch how fast the secondhand moves, once you know it’s counting down)
everyone is small in a hospital bed
tucked beneath coarse bleached blankets
cotton
used and used and used beyond all softness
her cheek is the pale of poplar ash
or clouded sky, hands limp
marionettes
with IV pump strings
a woman who raised a strong son,
who is now a fine man, who was herself
Flint
She made fire, She made hearth, She was Home
the one who Towered, and Sheltered, and Thundered
lost now to the aching stillness of a forest broken after a storm
sleeping
in anesthetized haze; old blade broken beyond reshaping
tomorrow will come, and she will be in it
evaporating slow as a salt pool
stranded
by a reckless tide
tomorrow will come, and she will be fading,
Lioness spent, life still hot in her teeth, until the very last
ember
exhales
18 thoughts on "Flint"
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What a fabulous tribute to this strong woman. Love the lines “evaporating slow as a salt pool” and “life still hot in her teeth” You gripped me from the opening line and never let go.
Thank you!! Truly appreciate your kind feedback!
Those last three lines just nailed it.
Like Liz, I was hooked from the opening line through the end.
Thank you, truly!
The first line is so good it forces you to re-read it before moving down. Great stuff.
Thank you so much!
first two lines are a great poem,
In & to themselves
Thanks Jim- I love that perspective! Sometimes less is truly so much more.
So many great moments here. I was struck my the image of “blankets/cotton/used and used and used beyond all softness”
Thank you!!
thanks for this!
i echo the comments written above.
my aunt just died…
which reminds me of my mom dying long ago.
wishing everyone peace.
Thank you Maria, I’m so sorry for the losses you’ve had. It never gets easier. I wish you so much peace as well.
whew! so visceral throughout . . . and beautiful
Thank you so much!
This is so beautiful, and achingly touching. I especially love these two lines:
“She made fire, She made hearth, She was Home
the one who Towered, and Sheltered, and Thundered”
Wonderful work.
Thank you friend!!
This is gorgeous, and I have to agree with Shaun “used beyond all softness” is the perfect description. Thank you for sharing.❤️
Thank you so much for reading and encouraging!