Flint
(watch how fast the secondhand moves, once you know it’s counting down)
everyone is small in a hospital bed
tucked beneath coarse bleached blankets
cotton
used and used and used beyond all softness
her cheek is the pale of poplar ash
or clouded sky, hands limp
marionettes
with IV pump strings
a woman who raised a strong son,
who is now a fine man, who was herself
Flint
She made fire, She made hearth, She was Home
the one who Towered, and Sheltered, and Thundered
lost now to the aching stillness of a forest broken after a storm
sleeping
in anesthetized haze; old blade broken beyond reshaping
tomorrow will come, and she will be in it
evaporating slow as a salt pool
stranded
by a reckless tide
tomorrow will come, and she will be fading,
Lioness spent, life still hot in her teeth, until the very last
ember
exhales
8 thoughts on "Flint"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
What a fabulous tribute to this strong woman. Love the lines “evaporating slow as a salt pool” and “life still hot in her teeth” You gripped me from the opening line and never let go.
Those last three lines just nailed it.
Like Liz, I was hooked from the opening line through the end.
The first line is so good it forces you to re-read it before moving down. Great stuff.
first two lines are a great poem,
In & to themselves
So many great moments here. I was struck my the image of “blankets/cotton/used and used and used beyond all softness”
thanks for this!
i echo the comments written above.
my aunt just died…
which reminds me of my mom dying long ago.
wishing everyone peace.
whew! so visceral throughout . . . and beautiful
This is so beautiful, and achingly touching. I especially love these two lines:
“She made fire, She made hearth, She was Home
the one who Towered, and Sheltered, and Thundered”
Wonderful work.