Sand Castle
“and so castles made of sand, melt into the sea, eventually”
—Jimi Hendrix
You are a sand castle
on the edge of the Atlantic,
“your wilderness,”
you told me.
This ocean has watched you
grow into a man
who loves to fish,
fill his pockets with shells,
hold up a shark tooth
like buried treasure,
bring his own boys
to learn the contours
of the beach.
Each day is a wave.
Every hour
the tide rises.
First, your hair—
you pulled gray beard
out with a pinch
and showed me.
Then the pounds
vanished beneath work clothes,
taking your blue-collar bulk.
The tide keeps coming.
Then muscle,
the moat around the castle,
began to wash away.
The Atlantic still remembers you
casting your line into dawn,
bent over the surf,
watching footprints blur
with each pass
looking for what it took
and left behind.
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So artfully drawn
an elegy that draws You in
Thanks, Jim!
I like this poem is constructed
Whoops, I wasn’t finished! I like the continual reference to the ocean and sand. It’s synonymous with your character. This a melancholy to it but bits not maudlin. It feels like it’s about this aging process. A lot of wisdom here!
I’ve missed your voice. Good to see you.
Thanks, Linda!
A beautiful elegy, tender and sad. So well done that the craft is all but invisible.
Thank you, Kevin!
Thank you, Rudy!
Well done, poet…
the image of a day as a wave is striking