The Critters Have Become Entititled
I fill the smart birdfeeder
It empties within hours
Cardinals ruffle their feathers
tilt their heads, glare at the camera
beady eyes knowing I am watching
Where’s the food?
I fill the smart birdfeeder
baffled against squirrels
sorting through
seed scattered on the ground
pigeons kicked from the platform
with four-toed galoshes
Chipmunks dart between the squirrels
to find a place
nervous feast
fear and greed oscillate
in their micro-quivers
I fill the smart birdfeeder
It empties within hours
Where’s the food?
Grackle swat teams zoom like drones
across the yard
They know where I live
I feel these creatures feeling me
awaiting my appearance
as if I’m Taylor Swift
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I’ve been noticing those “Grackle swat teams zoom like drones,” too
I don’t know why but this is the detail that sticks for me. I really heard it the way you chose to break the line.
“pigeons kicked from the platform/
with four-toed galoshes”
your birds think you are very cool 😎… great poem.
Those critters need to know their place! But nature do abhor a vacuum
Ha! Terrific.
And you ARE Taylor Swift.
Love: pigeons kicked from the platform
with four-toed galoshes
Nice to be a hero in your neighborhood
I think you bought that “smart” birdfeeder from the company seeing you the feed.
Oh, Taylor! What you do to me!
Love this, Mike!
Thank you all for your kind comments! The birdfeeder is empty again so I know what I’ll be doing first thing in the morning
Grackles would totally be feds. This is great.