Remembering a Love
It’s always unexpected when
the musty smell of a book,
music of Leonard Cohen,
or news item from Idaho, evokes
longing for the man who pulled
me into the queue for class
registrations so many years ago.
I knew breaking line was wrong
but I nestled next to him
and lost my heart to the Navy
veteran I’d met in German class
the semester before. Tall, blond Adonis,
he plucked me, shy. socially inept
and insecure, from a swamp of despair
and self-loathing, convinced me
I was attractive, desirable, my studies
in math and philosophy worthy of pursuit,
and our future together bright with possibility.
His arms provided needed sanctuary
and helped me unfold the wings
with which I would ultimately fly.
10 thoughts on "Remembering a Love"
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This is beautiful and compressed with image and story, Mary!
This is sweet. And I bet you were attractive and pursuing worthy pursuits just like he said
A love story ….writ large. I an see it and i can hear your voice in it.
The cutting in line w the navy man jumps off the page.
Wonderful, Mary. This poem melts me.
Sweetness: “longing for the man who pulled
me into the queue for class
registrations so many years ago.”
❤️ and 💔 all at once.
You honor him so much here.
It’s felt. Deeply. May we all find such, recognize such, and be remembered such.
Wonderful story, Mary and told in such a tender, compelling way.
Sweet love poem that suits you, Mary! Tender and bold, and I love the Leonard Cohen reference. Do I see a career in romance novels next?
I love how you opened with the prompts to involuntary memories. A beautiful, heartfelt remembrance.
I long to be writing beautiful soft pieces like this and perform them some day!