Tomorrow in the Garden
after John Donne
I wonder at tiny wildflowers, kneel.
Blooms tangled, jagged, entire, alive.
Toothwort thrust their pods of seed,
small samurai swords guard arriving
new pearls. Bloodroot petals bruised
near fallen twigs will only last a day
and then lift the green swollen future
toward Spiderwort, spill forth a display.
We bloom with sky wheel’s bright nail,
rising within the spring of life and root.
Even a crushed Mayapple in the trail
which requires us, sometimes, to move
and reattach life to soil and the forage
of turtles, until it forgives disturbances.
Declining coy blooms declare a westing.
So we kneel at wild gardens edge, near
Goldenseal, listen to the sky clear calls
of an unringing Bluebells forming seed.
The first drooping wilt of these simple
tattered crowns into an old common dirt
of years past is saying, yes we are still here.
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A beautiful wondering. Especially love “We bloom with sky wheelโs bright nail,/rising within the spring of life and root.”
and “until it forgives disturbances.”
Thank you for the feedback
The metaphors are so vivid and layered in this poem, Coleman. Well done!
Thanks Jeremy ๐
I wonder at tiny wildflowers, kneel.
Blooms tangled, jagged, entire, alive.
For me it paints a picture of the gardener as part of the garden that I really enjoy
Thank you ๐
use of words like “westing” and “coy” lend a quiet archaic tone
Thank you for noting that Gabby.
Lol….this one was frustrating and I wasn’t sure of it.
Doing an after something that’s a million years old is weird ๐
Good morrow is such a masterpiece tho…..
Thanks for reading
The rich images and the metaphors are superb. The whole poem is spectacular, but I really love that last stanza.
Thanknyou ๐
Lovely, Coleman. So crafted and composed, so tender. One of your best.
Thanks for those words.
Means the world.
Yeah I didn’t like it when I woke up and had to go touch some grass.
Lol
….you shoulda seen it with all the theess’s and thoughs and whertofores…..lol….
Great metaphors.
Thank you John, the source material was very inspiring ๐
I can’t believe you sustained that archaic voice all the way through. Good job.
Thank you love.
Sorry for all the cussing in the night…..lol
I love you โค๏ธ
Thank you to the readers of this……
You have let me see it with differnt eyes and I kinda like it now.
Much grattittude.
Lovely. Especially like the names of the flowers/plants you’ve chosen to include, the names are poetry by themselves.
Thanks Bill, there were many that did not make it in, might have to make another list ๐ ….lol….a prompt has surfaced..lol
Lovely, Coleman. I appreciate the flavoring of Donne without the heavy thou and hath and doth. All those th words! Wresting works so nicely. I’m a sucker for garden poems.
Yes !!!! Thou hast spaketh ๐
Thanks Sylvia and ……me too, never enough garden poems.
It’s an elegy forbidding mourning.
Joe !!!!! Hi Joe, you were the one person, I knew would get the reference ๐ great to see you here and thank you so much for reading this and commenting.