Imagine her surprise when desire arrives at 73
She thought she was done with all that
but something passes between them
a warm current of it
the thought is sticky
she touches it with her tongue
lets it wash over her
She steps back into the story
a liquidity moving, all muscle and bristle
waiting to be touched
imaginings low and sweet
She is surprised to find
the universe is one rhymed thing
the grass is, the sky is, water is
the song that lifts between two bodies
She wanted to write everything down
words rooted at the bottom of the lake
but first, before words, a feeling must root
so human and achy it’s worth celebrating
She runs the reels of him in her head
this wet commingling
still feels the kiss
shivers with its half-life
silver and dizzy as a disco ball
and the room kaleidoscoped into
blankets of stars
To touch the tender core of things
and tell of it, she will press it here
to the page, a dried flower,
something your body said to mine
Right now all she wants
is the two of them testing each other—
a settling into themselves
a story about human kindness
a breaking open, a breaking out
the future deepening in the heat
what a pleasure to say,
From here, we can make it up.
~ A cento, using lines/phrases from the following books:
All the Fierce Tethers, essays by Lia Purpura
Blade by Blade, poetry collection by Danusha Laméris
Entwined, Three Lyric Sequences by Carol Frost
Hereafter, fiction by Sarah Freligh
The Hurting Kind, poetry collection by Ada Limón
Tides, a novel by Sara Freeman
17 thoughts on "Imagine her surprise when desire arrives at 73"
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I love this title
amazing
Wow, Karen! I had no idea it was a cento until you said so at the end. A high compliment.
Thank you, Kevin!
Great title. Amazing cento.
Love how you use sorced material and make it your own.
Thank you, Pam.
This is gorgeous and so felt by the reader. Especially love:
She is surprised to find
the universe is one rhymed thing
the grass is, the sky is, water is
the song that lifts between two bodies
Thank you!
Thank you!
I second Gaby’s “amazing”. Startling all that you accomplish with this.
“the song that lifts between two bodies ” a fave.
Thanks, Bill!
I love this poem!
Thank you, Linda!
Another great poem, Karen. I especially like the tender ending. Also, the quatrains work to keep the poem slow, like it should be.
Thank you, Nancy!
Sweet and tender and amazing!
Thank you, Sylvia!
Our resident cento Queen! 👏👏👏