I Swallow the Moon
Rich folks keep their teeth until late in life.
“Rich Folks, Poor Folks, and Neither” Jim Harrison
with a mouth three teeth short of a box of Chicklets™
I lean on the dental school’s emergency clinic.
I sit agape below scrutiny and a surgical light.
Faculty says, “Consistent care…”
but they don’t tell me how I’d pay.
I ask about any studies;
they shake their masked heads.
My mouth wanes, never waxes.
Two more speciments cry for unaffordable care.
Five years between visits yet no tartar.
I baffle them — my anomalous mouth confuses experts.
“Brush your tongue,” they say.
Of course, I brush my tongue.
How else could my poems come out?
15 thoughts on "I Swallow the Moon"
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This is spectacular!
“My mouth wanes, never waxes.”
That line hits hard for me. I just love what you do with this poem— all the way to the golden last line. Yes!
Thank you so much!
So vivid and that landing!
Thank you, Deanna!
Love: “my anomalous mouth confuses experts” and the last lines bring the poem home very well.
Thank you, Greg!
Love the mouth as a moon and the observations.
Thank you, Samantha!
Delightful entry…with title: “I Swallow the Moon” to first line:” with a mouth three teeth short of a box of Chicklets”
And you don’t stop….
Lol the last stanza.
<>> Glad you enjoyed it, Pam!
Love this! Your last stanza is perfection!
Thank you so much, Leah!
Absolutely gaga over the title! Perfect landing! Way to take a bite out of the dental industry,
Thank you, Sylvia, and I love your pun. 😉
what a hoot!