A Wednesday Night Scene Between Roommates in a Young Twenty-Something’s First Apartment
We chat, inconsequential—your upcoming work shift, my day
It’s not often our schedules align in this small space
I sit at the counter fighting with boxes meant for Friday’s recycling
And it’s mere happenstance that I look up
Right as you bend over to check your bubbling pot on the stovetop
Your shirt is old and meant for comfort—a little loose, and short
It rides up slightly, exposing a loveliness I never knew existed
The soft curves of your back, your waist
And I think
Ah.
I get it, now.
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The restraint in this poem is superb.
I agree with Jeremy.
Very compressed snapshot.
Great concept.
Whitespace perfect and those last three lines.
Landed!!!!
“And I think
Ah.
I get it, now.”
“I sit at the counter fighting with boxes,” I like the metaphors. Well done, L!
Sexy poem!
so much in so few words!
Love the move from “We chat, inconsequential” to “The soft curves of your back, your waist”
Great ending: “And I think/Ah./I get it, now.”