Stretching My Legs
I no longer walk to get fit
but to see the sights,
my suburban streets —
the rusting red tricycle,
portable basketball goal
net ragged gray,
the peeling fire plug
where all the neighborhood dogs
lift a leg,
the house where
the owner was murdered
by a jealous lover,
the church steeple struck by lightning,
a driveway with its faded coat
of black tar —
this body limping along,
war-weary rebel laboring down
flowery ways and gruff avenues,
mind in contemplation
of the connectedness
between myself and others,
these my neighbors,
my sisters and brothers
in time.
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yes, I recognize those walks when I am paying attention and connecting to what I see
Thanks for taking us with you for a walk around your neighborhood.
Both flowery ways and gruff avenues. The last stanza is beautiful expression of your place in time and space.
The way you write about the suburbs dignifies them. It doesn’t sentimentalize them either. You get it just right!
Very well said, Bill!
A walking tour with detailed descriptions and filled with emotion and presence. The form allows the reader to walk along with you.
Some reason it’s this one
“the rusting red tricycle,
portable basketball goal
net ragged gray,”
That lingers for me
Couldn’t say why but I really like the it stays
I share Linda’s sentiments. You uncover the suburban nuances and complexities that are easily hidden in their quiet existence. Great write, Bill.
Wonderful observation and connection here, Bill.
You have such a wonderful way of including us in your world – of sweeping us along with your words, we can’t help but be amazed!
Flowery ways and gruff avenues! Nice!
Sounds like you know your neighborhood very well, and you can find stories in the most mundane of objects, like a peeling fire plug. But you left me wanting to know more about that murder! What a great poem!
Yes thanks for taking us along in your neighborhood and perspective!
Stunning! This ends so beautifully- this walk into a timeless connection with all of humanity.
Love this walk you take us on, the details you choose.
With Karen and others on this walk.
Got my attention here “the house where/the owner was murdered/by a jealous lover,”
That last line lifts the poem and makes it all universal to your reader. Gorgeous writing
This makes me think in a way that I really like thinking. How in the beginning I was driven by curiosity, then perhaps by form or function (fitness, in the poem) and then again curiosity but a different, cognizant kind. Thank you 🙏
You took me along with you in the nicest way this morning…