Climate Bi-Kus*
Gardening today,
I got sick in the mean heat
and humidity
made by callousness of man
~
Sad to say, my grand-
children will not see glaciers.
~
Future museums
of lost animals—called zoos.
~
Rain will be a poor
substitute for snow and ice.
~
Brittle leaves bookmark
out-of-print books of winter.
~
In a reluctant
peace, the snowball fights shall cease.
~
Pacific land dots
drown under the laughing waves.
~
Poems tell stories
of the lost cold, it’s just that
we breed teens who won’t
(or can’t) read the books we write.
~
The president can’t
care when he can’t stay awake
at the biggest game
of the NBA season.
*Bi-kus are haikus minus the third line (the final five syllables).
I spell the word this way because there is a transliterated
Japanese word spelled b-a-i-k-u that refers to bicycles, though
I have also seen baiku used online to describe haikus that are
about cycling. Are bi-kus an accepted form of poetry?
Damned if I know.
4 thoughts on "Climate Bi-Kus*"
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Bi-kus are new to me. I like the brevity.
I like how this bi-kus flowed into the next and drew the image fuller:
Gardening today,
I got sick in the mean heat
and humidity
made by callousness of man
~
Love how you have ~ where the third line would be.
The form is visually pleasing and each bi-kus houses a gem.
Especially love “Brittle leaves bookmark
out-of-print books of winter.
~
My understanding is that they are Lee, and are not constraind by strict syllables.
I like the split kigo in this one
“Brittle leaves bookmark
out-of-print books of winter.”
And I agree qith Pam about the way you used the dash in thw sequence.
Creative and wonderful and current!
Poets, cooking in June already.
What’s not accepted in poetry? These sure read as poems to me, nice flow one into the other.
Love these!