Climate Bi-Kus*
Gardening today,
I got sick in the mean heat
and humidity
made by callousness of man
~
Sad to say, my grand-
children will not see glaciers.
~
Future museums
of lost animals—called zoos.
~
Rain will be a poor
substitute for snow and ice.
~
Brittle leaves bookmark
out-of-print books of winter.
~
In a reluctant
peace, the snowball fights shall cease.
~
Pacific land dots
drown under the laughing waves.
~
Poems tell stories
of the lost cold, it’s just that
we breed teens who won’t
(or can’t) read the books we write.
~
The president can’t
care when he can’t stay awake
at the biggest game
of the NBA season.
*Bi-kus are haikus minus the third line (the final five syllables).
I spell the word this way because there is a transliterated
Japanese word spelled b-a-i-k-u that refers to bicycles, though
I have also seen baiku used online to describe haikus that are
about cycling. Are bi-kus an accepted form of poetry?
Damned if I know.
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Bi-kus are new to me. I like the brevity.
I like how this bi-kus flowed into the next and drew the image fuller:
Gardening today,
I got sick in the mean heat
and humidity
made by callousness of man
~
Love how you have ~ where the third line would be.
The form is visually pleasing and each bi-kus houses a gem.
Especially love “Brittle leaves bookmark
out-of-print books of winter.
~
My understanding is that they are Lee, and are not constraind by strict syllables.
I like the split kigo in this one
“Brittle leaves bookmark
out-of-print books of winter.”
And I agree qith Pam about the way you used the dash in thw sequence.
Creative and wonderful and current!
Poets, cooking in June already.