Learning to Surf
shoulder: the part of a wave away from it’s vertical break.
bowl: shallows where the wave is drawing up water.
trough: the lower portion of a wave, in relation to it’s peak.
I have always been attracted to large powerful shoulders, the
ones with the smooth ripples, and their abilities. They lift you,
protect from danger. Begin to learn, and it’s the waves, the sea.
The shoulder is where they lift you by the tail and push forward.
That’s when the feeling starts in the hips. Hips tilt slightly, lift
and you feel it firming when your need for any control melts into
pure pleasure, a willing release to the wave. They take control,
you slide. Back arching, push yourself up with your arms, hands
pressed flat to the hard, waxed board. Together as one, pushing
them down, while lifting yourself. When you rise, with knees bent,
your legs spread themselves, (some ancient instinctual knowing
of the body) wide, stable and comfortable. Yes, it’s just right,
the angle for thrusting comes as a surprise you feel, and know.
dressed in light cloth
as we slide onto waves—
intoxicated
Pushing forward with flexed hips, holding on with nothing but your
curled toes, waves drop you onto themselves. A deepening moment
for just this, then you are ready for the coming together of timeless
release. Above the glistening turbulent bowl below the compressed
slickened currents of the rising trough, your body knows what to do.
The feeling of power in your thighs, the strength, where hip-shifting
presssure starts rolling into rhythm. You rise, reaching, again toward
their wet lip, curling, crashing over and enveloping whole who you are.
this is how we learn
we all ride the same wave—
right there! whale song
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Didn’t realize surfing could be a life lesson! thx for this lesson and exciting vibe.
Thanks Linda.
This one took a few days 😀
I love the structure, especially the definitions in the first three lines. Helps me enter the pulsing power of the wave and the muscled energy of the rider.
I also like how it looks on the page.
Love: “power in your thighs, the strength, where hip-shifting
presssure starts rolling into rhythm. You rise, reaching, again toward/their wet lip, curling, crashing over and enveloping whole who you are.”
Thank you for the comment on the definitions.
That was Linda’s idea. It does help I think to have them.
Such vivid physicality in this one, Coleman! I love how you blend practical knowledge with deep sensory pleasure.
Hole Waimea – Ka‘iwakīloumoku – Hawaiian Cultural Center https://share.google/1caPLC3UX0es2H7gq
I wasn’t sure that link would work. Anyway,
this song/chant/dance is learned by the senior class
and is part of graduation at the high school in the town
I grew up in, Waimea. Some learn the song and some
if they show interest, are allowed the koana nature.
Neither way is frowned on, it is the nature of learning.
The kaona are a holy teaching tool for the people of
Hawaii, and mine is not an attempt at appropriation.
It is a simple attempt to honor the place I was raised
and the people who helped me learn. The true expert
practioners have a subtlety that I haven’t yet achieved.
Thank you Jeremy. This way of blending the story would be called a Kaʻona where I grew up.
Thank you for noticing and commenting.
Love this, especially the end, “right there! whale song” — which takes this poem by the shoulders and turns it to face the vast ocean. Beautiful, sensual writing throughout. A wonder.
Yes!! Thank you Bill. So much, it means so much.
“We all ride the same wave.” I love it!
Thank-you John 😀
You,
that surfboard
and those waves
need to get
a room
Lololololololololololol
I did make a real attempt the subtlety of the Kaʻona
But it’s hard.
“Ain’t sayin nothin, just sayin.”
😏
I was thinking the same thing, Kevin. It was so sensual, at one point I thought he’s talking about a different kind of surfing.😊
the timeless release!!!
That—
Coleman – Were you a Beach Boy in another life? A Kahanamoku reincarnation? I just love all the information you give us here – the surf lesson and the culture flavor!
“we all ride the same wave” – yes, sir!
Coleman,
Love all the details, so rich, so sensory, I felt like I was right there.
wonderful description that evokes the experience, even if one has never surfed