Ethereal Travail
pale angel in moonlight
bathes frail frame
after falling from afar
transforms herself
just enough to feel fear
that it wouldn’t be enough
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pale angel in moonlight
bathes frail frame
after falling from afar
transforms herself
just enough to feel fear
that it wouldn’t be enough
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Amazing sounds to paint the picture of your poem.
Thank you, Virginia Lee. In return, I appreciate the plosive /p/ sounds in your comment: “paint the picture of your poem”
Love: “ falling from afar/transforms herself/just enough to feel fear”
Thank you, Pam, for your close reading. Happy whenever you find my poetry of interest
Beautifully constructed picture!
Nancy, thank you. Pleased you could relate to it
I love all the frictive repeated f sounds
Thank you, Shaun, for noticing the fricatives. Appreciate your perceptiveness