orbital decay
the voice of the wurlitzer
came sugared through the salt
and the cotton-candy clouds
dragged their pink skirts
over the shore
where no ship ever docked
gold glinted
off the brass wotsit
at the center of everything
as if the whole world
had one bright pin
holding it down
the horses rose and fell
and rose
with their wooden throats open
and the painted swan
went nowhere beautifully
we passed it again
and again
passed the terns
the locked arcade
the tide
we passed the version of me
who got everything she ever wanted
she was standing there
in her favorite shades
under the striped awning
just watching me
go round
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So so very many amazing metaphors and visuals and parallels in this piece. Absolutely gorgeous.
My favorite is the way the
“cotton-candy clouds
dragged their pink skirts
over the shore
where no ship ever docked”
Fascinating poem. Not sure I’m entirely grasping what’s happening but I dig it.
I read this as a calliope song for the mother. No matter.
Great poem !!!!!
the merry go round is so beautifully done.
Phenomenal