[First day of summer]
First day of summer,
in my head
falling leaves . . .
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First day of summer,
in my head
falling leaves . . .
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I love the positioning of the seasons in this one. Many meanings. Nicely done.
Thanks H.A.! Enjoyed your poem today.
This a repeat of many dinners about your haiku. How do you capture the words so well? You never cease to amaze.
Thanks Linda! I guess I just get lucky once in a while…
thanks for articulating the tension in such crisp and brittle fashion
Thanks Gaby!
so much happening here
change is always just around the corner
Just so, Laverne.
I like that! Unexpected, and conveys a very tangible turn in the mind!
Thanks Mike!
Ugghh – I’ve been seeing back to school stuff already . . .
Yep but I also do it to myself…
Terse and thought-provoking!
Thanks Eric!
Love the forward-looking mind here. How do you really feel about summer!
Ha! Not my favorite season. I’m a spring and autumn guy…
I noticed a red/yellow leaf on the ground this morning when I was walking! I am a summer lover, so I’m not ready!
I’m totally ready 😏
I love the form of this haiku, like wind in the trees.
Thanks Carole!
These tiny lines send me in so many wonderful directions. Love this nugget, Kevin.
Thanks Pam!
We miniaturists have to stick together 😏
❤️
Sharp as always! Unexpected ending. I’ve been holding onto spring with all my might, but it escaped and turned to summer. Happy Solstice!
You too, Sylvia!
Absolutely yes! This is how I felt on this day, also! Another wonderful haiku! I really enjoy your work!,
Thanks so much, Winter!
i really like the way
on the first day of summer
you’re already thinking of fall.
Me too.
Sad, eh Jim?