Porcelain Movement 2
The First Fracture
i held it because someone had to—
she called me her favorite.
her sorrow arrived like a storm,
and i became the bowl she poured herself into.
young, i learned to steady a voice that wasn’t mine.
i believed it meant i was the one
who had to keep her whole.
i remember the year she shattered—
how the house tilted toward her grief,
how i moved through the rooms
collecting what she dropped—
confessions,
the small, bright pieces of a life
she couldn’t hold together.
i didn’t know then that i was learning a skill.
her breaking taught me the language—
the way a voice splits midsentence,
the way a house rearranges itself
around a wound.
i was young, parsing the fault lines,
learning damage’s fluency—
how every story has a seam
you feel before you see.
she spilled herself into me—
her fear, her wanting, her wild,
calling me the only one who understood.
i was young, too young to be the place
where someone else lived,
but she made a room inside me
and i kept it lit, believing that was love.
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Intense! Really descriptive…
Of difficult and deep feelings…Bravo!
‘of difficult and deep feelings’
Thank you for that <3
Very sorrowful, especially that moment where you acknowledge that something–someone–you once treasured so greatly was actually a source of such pain. And the words themselves still sound like they come from someone very young, even as it is obvious a lot of time has passed since “the year she shattered.”
Spot on as always L. Coyne, It has taken me 2 + decades to process it all.
Wow,,,”her sorrow arrived like a storm” and “how the house tilted toward her grief,”
Thank you, Pam!
This is so profound- I was young pursing the fault lines learning damages ‘s fluency. So sorry you had to carry such a burden at a young age.
Beautiful poem, Jeremy. You approach the subject with much empathy, and skillful writing. Favorite is the picking up what she dropped … so vivid.
Bill! I’ve missed you stopping by! Thank you for letting me know.
I’ve been lousy about commenting this LexPoMo. Have really enjoyed your writing this year, Jeremy. It’s one of the things I really like about LPM, seeing each other grow year to year.
I love this ending: “but she made a room inside me/
and i kept it lit, believing that was love.”
You convey such a heavy sadness with delicate detail. Impressive. I love that last stanza. Powerful work!
“The First Fracture,” Very intense, Jeremy!
that you “became the bowl” is even more direct than the actual cracked bowl in James’ “The Golden Bowl”
Wow! This is phenomenal. I tried choosing a favorite to copy and paste…but it’s nearly the entire poem. Movement 2 definitely brings Movement 1 into more focus (for me at least). Devastating and beautiful at once.
Wow! I relate to so much of this. Touched me deeply, Jeremy.