The Grass Cutters
buzz after downpour.
Soar patterns on hillside green
before the next swarm.
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buzz after downpour.
Soar patterns on hillside green
before the next swarm.
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I like the description of “hillside green.” I can almost see the vibrancy in my mind!
You achieved your “softer green” here! Nicely done.
A perfect description, Roberta! And great word choice – buzz, soar, swarm.
Yes
“Soar patterns on hillside green”
Oh heck yeah!!!!
And really
The qhole.thing love love the title.
Grass cutters is reminiscent of the eastern tradition of the “stream steppers”
Great poem and thank you for sharing your talent with us this month. It has been wonderful 😊
Another powerhouse of a poem, Roberta.
Love the sounds and muscle in ‘buzz’ and ‘swarm’. and that you start the poem with buzz and end with swarm.