I Too Lose America
I dropped my wine
when I heard about
the Tree of Life attack
the purple pooling
on the tiles of my
synagogue here as I
imagined blood stain-
ing synagogue floors
there and souls for-
ever fixed at prayer
Sabbath shattered its
fine crystal cutting the
feet of peace not to be
restored at least not
the way I knew it Sab-
bath peace would now
be a soldier home from
war crippled bandaged
though at least alive
I thought of my uncle
once the rabbi there
He claimed descent
from Rashi* wore his
teachings like a paper
coat Now I saw them
both walking weeping to-
gether each tear like my
gether each tear like my
wine a lost drop of hope
I should have thought
of Mother Emanuel
her children killed in
their place of peace
and all churches that
burned down South
Of citizens snatched
from city streets for
the crime of being
brown We worship
this way now One eye
on the heavens another
on the door A tough love
God is telling us to pray
together Otherwise amid
the flags and fireworks I
too shall lose America
*Rashi was a medievel Jewish scholar.
He also made wine. Too bad we can’t
taste the grapes he crushed.
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Powerful, Lee. That tight column makes the poem feel constricted, a pretty apt effect for the subject matter. Leave it to you to find the right form. “One eye on the heavens, another on the door.” — sad state of affairs. Nice one!
I agree, Bill. Powerful indeed.
This poem is powerful. It is a great companion for Hughes’ “I, Too Sing America”. Thank you for gifting us your incredible poetry all month!
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Thanks for this, Lee, and for all your work this month.
You visually show shattering in each tragic column.
Love: “One eye/on the heavens another/on the door”
Haunting. As in, won’t leave me alone. I shall bring this poem into my July 4th observance and pray.
I agree with Bill. I think the form really does give it a claustrophobic feeling. And it’s certainly a powerful and tragic piece. It’s been a pleasure reading your work, sir!