The Artist
(for Pat Lawrence, 1941-2025)
She keeps dropping things—
Scrabble tiles, the endless pills,
the pens & pencils she’s always using
to sketch faces, landscapes,
the occasional naughty cartoon.
Parkinson’s has done its number
on her. A stroke hasn’t helped.
Now everything slips through her fingers
& clatters to the floor, rolling under
the kitchen table, the sofa, the bed.
But art’s too important to give up on,
too much who she is. Her email handle
is patlartist. Her paintings don’t seem serious
until I realize that their smiling doggies
are all beloved pets long gone, mourned
& deeply missed. A bodacious self-portrait
in the nude on a beach, which makes me
laugh at first, has jagged lines
racing up her back, indicating the pain
she was in at the time, & still is.
One morning on the porch, she tells me
that because she can’t paint anymore,
she’s giving up sketching, too, out of spite.
I’m so angry, she says. If I can’t paint,
I’m done with all of it. I say Don’t be like that,
then leave to get our weekly groceries.
Next morning when I come downstairs,
a bowl of pears has found its way
from a kitchen counter into her sketchbook,
rounded, luscious, sex on a beach.
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Lovely portrait, Kevin. Making art from grief — I can relate. Enjoyed your work this month. Hope to see you around!
Thanks Bill! The feeling is mutual. ❤️
love the way “sex on a beach” echoes “A bodacious self-portrait/ in the nude on a beach” to show how with her art she defies her limitations
Thanks Gaby!
very tender, love the ending
Thanks Mike!
What a well rendered
homage to your artist
friend. This one filled
me with sadness then elation.
I’m so glad, Jim! We just have to keep a-going, don’t we?
From dropping things to sketching the pears – a detailed tribute to the tenacity and courage of a remarkable woman.
Thanks Carole!
❤️
❤️ right back atcha
A beautiful tribute, Kevin. I love the way you merge her self portrait with the sketch of pears at the end. Glad she kept creating. It has been wonderful to read your poems this month.
Thanks H.A.!
This is beautiful, Kevin. If you’ll allow me, you’ve created a well-rounded portrait of your friend. Great to read your work, as always. Take care!
Thanks Nancy! And ditto.
This one is wonderful. A lovely look into the life of a lovely artist.
Thanks Lauren! You would have loved her. She could be tricky to deal with at times but it was well worth the effort.
Sweet elegy, Kevin. A lovely tribute to a friend.
Thanks Bill!
Whether short or long, your poems weave story, angst, joy, and humor. This is my favorite of all yours this month. 💜
Wow, Pam, thanks! I hope I did her a modicum of justice.
I love how sex isn’t tawdry in this portrait, but indicative of a fullness of life—an inner lusciousness in spite of everything age has brought.
Kevin, you write with such empathy for your subjects. You raise them up to be seen and in so doing, we rise, too. Thank you, Kevin—for your poems, your encouragement, this.
What a beautiful comment, Mary! Thank you. And I enjoyed reading you too this month.
Kevin, I echo all the above and add that your poem makes me feel that I knew this artist.
Thanks Mary!
So good to see you in Midway on Sunday! Thanks for coming.
You told me her story in three beautifully written stanzas. It is a joy to read your stuff, Kevin. Especially the short form used this month — so much said with so few words.
Thanks Lee! Good to read your work too this month!
Such a beautiful tribute to Pat! enjoyed your poems and comments this month!
Thanks Linda! You too.
“Now everything slips through her fingers” is such a heavy concluding line.
She sounds amazing. You paint her beautifully, honoring her and her pain, your words made my heart ache.
I do love that the sketching prevailed here.
Thanks Mary! Yes, she kept sketching until the end.
<3 and a tear maybe.
Awww, Alissa! Thanks my dear.
Thanks for this poem. I still miss her and the happy hours on her front porch. Your poem captures so much that I loved about her.
Thanks Larry!
Pitch-perfect portrait, Kevin. Authentic and emotionally honest.
Be well till we meet again next June
Thanks so much. And yes–till next year!
What a sweet way to honor her! She sounds like she was a remarkable woman in many respects. It seems a fitting farewell to her and to June,. Thanks for keeping us entertained! Mary was telling me what a wonderful reading you all had in Midway. I’m so sorry I couldn’t make it.
Thanks Sylvia! Until next year, God willing.
What a tender poem. I have so enjoyed your poems here, and can’t wait to read more in 2027. Take care, Kevin.
Thanks Karen! Ditto ❤️
Wow, wow, wow!! Stellar poem. I was so surprised by the reveal that this is the speaker’s wife. And the ending, with juicy artwork and the provocative name. Chef’s kiss.
Too bad I can’t edit my comment! Lol. I realized after the 2nd read that this is not necessarily a partner, but a loved person, nonetheless
No worries, Ellen! I was Pat’s live-in assistant/cook/chauffeur and caregiver for the last 6 months of her life. Sometimes we probably looked a lot like an old married couple 😏
And yes, she was loved—by me and almost everyone who knew her. ❤️
Wow. This really had a wonderful conclusion and was a powerful piece. Very well written, sir! It’s been a pleasure reading your work this month.