4:02 AM
4:02 AM yesterday
I open the garage door–
back my SUV out
into the open.
I don’t have a remote
so I must close the door
manually.
I duck to avoid the closure
and then I put the car in reverse
backing to turn and go out straight,
In its first quarter, the moon, bright
above the two masive oaks,
with a bumper crop of leaves,
after this wet summer,
its tip pointing down
gives me pause to think
that science tells us the gravity
of that moon rules tides,
but my father,
if he were alive,
would say the moon is
spilling water,
and who am I
to question
his wisdom?
4:03 AM the next morning
after trying to post my poem,
for hours with no
internet access,
the world is dark outside.
I join the darkness
welcoming the cool breeze.
Two night birds sing,
their sounds excited,
poetry to my ears.
Behind me,
in the woods,
a buck deer snorts.
I have wondered
if some hunter took him
for a trophy,
and now I know.
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I like how this quiet, introspective poem captures the liminal space between night and morning. I feel in those early hours my mind is both restless and strangely clear.
I love this ending and so many lines! “and who am I to question his wisdom?” Really caught me.
Jeremy, in those early hours when your mind is both restless and strangely clear we can write poetry and upset feelings for our readers. Thank you for this insight…
Thanks for your liking of my words. I appreciate you for your words, Jasmine…