A Fish Tale; Sheer Pleasure
I caught a pacific blue marlin once,
it was so big
we couldn’t even get it in the boat.
Early morning, we get a late start,
but the low sun is also rising.
We are heading to the far south,
leaving from Honokōhau harbor
for a long downhill run to Milolii.
we notice from the chatter
on the radio, this is a tournament
weekend. Our boat is not entered
but it is fun hearing all the hookup
calls, eating Vienna sausages
and laughing at the, Zero/Zero/Zero
responses flying back and forth.
on the radio.
But then the rigger band snaps hard.
BANG! One of the big gold twelves
begins to howl, screaming out thick line
through the stainless wheels in the eyes
on the thick, gleaming red and white rod.
While we scramble to get the other lines
in, the captain smashes the throttle with
one hand, holds the wheel with the other
and presses the button down on the mic
with the third, laughing and yelling, over
and over, and, still laughing. HooOOK—UUP!
Getting the other lines in is a real chore
and every pole that goes to the cabin
rests on it’s own padded teak shelf.
By the time we look, the last rod left
in a holder is bowed like a palm tree
in a storm and the reel is near empty.
My fish! My turn in the chair, this is—
my…….fish.
* Editor: Jules Unsel
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I love how frantic this feels!
Apparently it’s a frantic, fish tale night 🤣
We need some fish tales
thanks Joseph 😀
Ok…been waiting to use this line since it in a reply you made… wait for it….”Is this a real poem” Coleman?
Sounds like it is with these lines: the rigger band snaps hard./BANG! One of the big gold twelves/begins to howl, screaming out thick line”
My cousin Edward Alan Givens, may he rest in peace in fishing heaven, caught a 1,093-pounds, 12-ounce Virginia blue marlin in 1978 by from Norfolk Canyon waters. It took him eight and a half hours but the way we tell it in our family he battled it for 3 days 😂
Yeah !!!! Creeley, such a great line !!!!!
So now is probably not the time to remind people of how notorious fish tales for embellishment.
This one though, is a real poem and everything in the tale is true, in the story. 😉
😃
Lol….OK so I messed up the answer, it’s funny ” Welll, every word, that is in the story, is true, in the story.”
😉
ohhhhhh
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Wow, what a ride! The ending is perfect!
Thank you Jeremy.
I wasn’t sure where this was gonna end but it really did its own kind of deep breath and paused. Right there.
Thanks for reading and commenting 🙂
What a ride! Such a powerful poem, Coleman.
“But then the rigger band snaps hard.
BANG! One of the big gold twelves”
Amazing.
I loved any trip that involved my grandfather, Vienna sausages and an Ale-8 when I was a kid. Thanks for the fish tale.