A Geography of Endurance Day 2
Running from myself is like driving a hollow at dusk
down Browns Fork—trees leaning so close
they form a tunnel. I think I’m escaping,
but the land is just a ribcage closing around me.
It’s a Whippoorwill road past Thelma,
a switchback where blame stacks so tall
it throws my shadow off the edge.
I drive toward a gentility I don’t possess,
passing coal trucks piled high with the things I won’t say.
My identity is a blind curve—
too narrow for two versions of me
to pass without one going over the edge.
I’m not running toward anywhere—
only stirring up silt in the gravel
until the rearview disappears.
Underneath the roles I play,
parts of me stay scarred by coal dust,
hidden from every mirror.
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the land is just a ribcage closing around me- great image! whole poem is filled with great imagery
Thank you Linda, that is my favorite line I have written recently!
Jeremy is this a series that you are working? I like it. Yeah I agree qith Linda, great imagery.
This one got me:
“a switchback where blame stacks so tall/
it throws my shadow off the edge.”
I’m happy you like it Coleman!
This is fire! I really love that entire first stanza
Shaun! We must have been reading each others poems at the same time lol
Thank you, thank you.
The imagery and the intensity here is outstanding! I especially love this: “but the land is just a ribcage closing around me.” Fantastic write.
If I could just get the words on the paper as creative as you!
Great imagery!
Thank you John, I’m glad we are connecting this year!
Jeremy! My god! This is my favorite of your poems so far, by far. The measured, musical, careful language, the seriousness, the deep feeling—a quantum leap for you. Congratulations, young man.
Kevin, no lie, I was really inspired by Smoke! Thank you, I’m excited to share what all I’ve been working on.
the way the last stanza qualifies what came before makes me trust the writer that much more
Thank you for reading so closely Gaby, I feel like you always understand what I am trying to do. I really appreciate that.
I’m glad I caught sight of this poem today. Your sense of locality and the scar it has produced.
This poem is a bag full of feeling.
Thanks Jim! I think I am going to keep posting at midnight to give the poem a full 24 hours.
Yessss:
trees leaning so close/they form a tunnel
a switchback where blame stacks so tall/it throws my shadow off the edge.
Brilliant: My identity is a blind curve
Thank you Pam, I’m glad you enjoyed!
I’ve been on that road! Love when writers use specific places to open our thoughts to emotions. “My identity is a blind curve” is the meat of the poem for me. How many ways that line can be interpreted! Lovely job, Jeremy!
Oh, how cool! Thank you Sylvia.
So many gripping lines here, and I , too, hope it’s part of a bigger project. My favorite: “…passing coal trucks piled high with the things I won’t say.”
Y’all are really pressing for some answers lol Thank
Thank you Lee, I am looking forward to us connecting more this year!
I love the way you use concrete language. You have created so many beautiful lines here.
Thank you, Jazmine! I’m looking forward to reading more of your work this year.