A Holding Place
Venus hung above
the scattered broken glass
glitter of the city
blazing bright
a shard kicked off
into the sky
Venus hung above
the scattered broken glass
glitter of the city
blazing bright
a shard kicked off
into the sky
Wow, I love this. The imagery is magical.
Thanks Autumn!
Well done!
Thank you Nancy!
Beautiful. Somehow reminds me of Las Vegas, off in the desert with its stories
I love that, and you may well be correct. I found this in the notebook I was writing in and and I may well have written it while out west. I think all the others I have published this year I wrote the day they were published but this one was different. I appreciate your feedback!