a meal behind
unbound cloth- heavy thatch
smokeless chimneys
make
unrecognizable portraits
beyond the grassless path-
fourteen floorboards
from
a brotherhood of branches.
Dustin ! Wow!
It’s a painting. I can see the traces of the bristles.
I can see it too. Very nice.
what a great description
beyond the grassless path
I appreciate the meter and the way the poem staggers like planks of a floor
a brotherhood of branches–beautiful line!