A Muse
Here we stand in the sky
feet planted on Calliope notes.
Hands reaching for the
stars
that e x p l o d e and then
drift as if
trade winds
of time or space or
hand of dark
matter is
dragging lighter fluid
through the hot
wet paint of creation.
We could have shattered
a crystalline skylight and
used one of the shards
as a pallette knife to slice
mushroom spore frozen in the river
that survived the journey. Were
our lives for nothing?
Or is it
maybe just always
this way?
It is impossible to be breathing the air
without the air impossibly breathing
you.
She
sings.
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deft use of white space
This one grabbed and would not let go O Captain, my Captain. Special favorites were the wafting of the wind, and e x p l o d e.
the hot wet paint of creation! wow.
loved everything about this.
nice form(less?) wander on the page
each word finding/taking/adding
a sense of balance and becoming.
dragging lighter fluid
through the hot
wet paint of creation.
Wow! All of it!
“hand of dark
matter is
dragging lighter fluid
through the hot
wet paint of creation.” is epic and gorgeous. Thanks for sharing!
I love the shape of this poem.
Wow:
hand of dark
matter is
dragging lighter fluid
through the hot
wet paint of creation.
Wow! I will think about the air breathing me the next time I am out for a walk! I love your perspective.
Well I have copied the same phrase :
“hand of dark
matter is
dragging lighter fluid
through the hot
wet paint of creation.”
that has proven to be quite popular—but I must go forward to say it is a combination of words that lifts me up into the sky. Even its placement on the page moves like a paint stroke..it comes across–.The strong visuals going on in this poem and its movement/journey–all so wonderful and Calliope would be pleased!
Thank you ann
And especially this.
“Calliope would be pleased”
It means more than you know.
Thank you:-)