(Exeunt.)
Climax:
tear-salted words
of regret, a
graceful exit from a
no-fault disaster,
bad timing for
true intents.
Denouement:
Your tattooed
gestures seem
slick with convenience, like
your words.
Bedroom and
tantrum footage flickers,
the audio, fast promises,
desperate bargainings of a
condemned man.
Epilogue:
I wear the ashes of my
life like war paint, you
scatter yours at the
seashore. May the wind
shift back toward
your mouth.
Slick plot arc and killer ending
very intimate and
really real.
nice work.