A Nightmare of Waves
I.
Sky alive with raggedy ravens, one swelled
to a massive Mesozoic shadow-bird, beak
open in a croak so deep, so raucous, it jolts
vibrations along telephone wires, ripples
fields into waves like a sea, twists trees
into whirligigs, one tall trunk a totem
pole of bulging eyes stacked one upon
another, all the better to see you with, my dear.
II.
Some things you can’t unsee, as when the nurse
calls late at night to say they somehow tore
Mom’s leg open lifting her into bed. Ambulance
summoned, we rush to the hospital. The amount
of blood lost from the foot-long gash, its depth,
surges shock through my body, shivering
from belly outward like the scream
I want to unleash.
~ Inspired by Charles E. Burchfield’s Telegraph Music, 1949
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one image a premonition of the other
If “nightmare of waves” isn’t the collective noun used commonly, it should be. Every bit as wonderful as “murder of crows” which this nbrings to mind in section 1. Nice work!
I appreciated this poem and the tension between the two sections
Thank you!
Wow, the shift from the first section to the second section is both subtle and stunning.
Thank you!
Love the way you move from a nature scene to a personal one, the connection between one nightmarish view & a nightmarish experience, & the tight structure & form of the lines. Packs a punch!
Thanks, T.M.
You have captured the awfulness of the experience so well in the last lines.
all of the above.
and stanza II is an experience I had with my own mom
Scary as hell. I’d never seen anything like that.