A Shower Just Won’t Do
Bubbles, poured
much too lavishly, have been
whipped up and up and up
by the insistent jets of the jacuzzi,
burying her
inside soft billowing fluffs
of fragrant foam. She scoops out
her face, giggling, giddy. She’s
made up her mind.
White lace curtains filter
light, stencil flowers on the wall
above her bubble bath.
She traces their patterns
with her big toe until
shapes blur.
So sleepy. She just wants
to close her eyes and drift off
before these beautiful white clouds
get stained red.
8 thoughts on "A Shower Just Won’t Do"
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Well, THAT helped me wake up. May be my favorite of yours so far. (should we be concerned, dear?)
powerful writting. a jolt at the end for sure… like larry, hoping all is well…
So vivid and such a twist from one state of mind to another. The “red” signals so many things not said. This one is very powerful for the voice (which may or may not be yours)
Wow!
Chilling ending. Rereading I see clues. Excellent
Thanks for the comments everyone! This poem led me to the ending.
I really thought you were going some place nice Kathleen. Then, BANG. She really had made up her mind. The title becomes so ironic. Good stuff!
Last stanza a surprise. I’ve enjoyed your words this month, Kathleen!
almost missed this ominous bath