Abscess
borrowed from Latin abscessus:
“withdrawal, departure”
Tufted black and white cat
used to stalk the hydrangeas.
used to stalk the hydrangeas.
Together we’d shouldered winter
in tandem, quarrying the concrete walls
of the apartment building
like two wary neighbors.
We shared a suspicious caution,
two cracked teeth that have plagued us both
for months. I’d occasionally share
passing glances, my bologna,
until it disappeared at random–
I couldn’t tell you when.
I couldn’t tell you when.
I’m all too good at ignoring
what’s in front of me;
avoiding dentists, the phone that rings,
a certain tightening in my lungs.
The rottenness sours my mouth
in that old familiar way.
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yes, I’m told that cats are good (maybe stoic) about hiding their pain
💛 It never let me get too close, but I wonder if it belonged to another resident who just happened to move away. I’d like to hope so.
Misery loves company, eh Shaun?
Ought to get that tooth looked at anyway tho. It’ll come back to bite you.
I think so, sometimes. At least misery would like a little company occasionally. 😅 and the tooth is/was its own saga honestly!
I love that you used bologna in a poem. It is a neglected word. Seriously Its an effective poem.
Thank you, Linda! Another common name I used to hear for it was “round steak” 😅
Yes, thank you for bringing bologna into a poem. Haven’t had it since I was a kid, though we called it “baloney.” And we fried it in a skillet with American cheese melted over it; ate it in on toasted white bread with Miracle Whip, never mayonnaise.
Love the interaction with the cat.
Thank you, Karen! We used to have it a lot growing up too–I still love it panfried in butter, cut thick with a little bit of Cajun season til it get a little crispy at the edges and slapped in between some white bread. 🍽
Great camaraderie with the cat!
Thanks, Linda. I actually saw it again tonight–a welcome surprise!
I like how painful this feels (very effective):
a certain tightening in my lungs.
The rottenness sours my mouth
in that old familiar way.
Thank you, Arwen!
Shaun – So many masterly touches! “Shouldered winter in tandem” – quarrying walls – strong verbs!
I’m all too good at ignoring
what’s in front of me; – wow! this hit home!
Thank you! I’m trying to name it and maybe I’ll get better at it. :p
Beautiful imagery–I see you and cat and feel the pain. I especially loved “together we’d shouldered winter
in tandem.”
Thank you, Michele!
I really like the idea of your tandem lives in winter. 🙂
Thank you, K!
love final couplet
Thank you, Pat!
I am attracted to person-in-an-apartment poems for their appreciation of setting and scene. Here I also like the contradiction of “suspicious caution” and “ignoring what’s in front of me”. There’s a way in which this mystery, for me, can propel this poem. So when I read (and re-read) I am wondering about how this person doesn’t ignore the specific name of a plant and, likely, knows where the bologna went. Very enjoyable.
Thanks, Jon! I always like that idea of being pretty honest and playing with the idea of honesty in a “confessional” poem
I’m all too good at ignoring
what’s in front of me
This piece moved me in surprising ways. The ache of it (sorry–had to go there) and the inevitability.
Glad I got to meet you at The Table last night!
Thanks, Ellen. I enjoyed meeting you and hearing you read. I often think about that inevitable thing–what might be fated.
I love this mirroring between cat and man. And bologna is a brilliant choice!
haha, yes:
We shared a suspicious caution,
two cracked teeth that have plagued us both
Thank you Pam!