Alone at the Window
Cicadas crawl out of the cracked
earth, buzzing. She hasn’t seen
or held a hand
for six days. Is it solitude
or desolation? Sadness? The faucet
drips, the dog’s pink tongue
laps water from a cereal bowl,
then scratches at the door. The smooth
flags of her ears whip
in the afternoon wind as she scampers
through marsh grass chasing a swamp
rabbit. She can’t surrender
to his embrace, his exquisite dirt-
embedded fingers gone. He can’t lace
his leather & nylon snakeboots, mud
crusted from foraging, collect sweet wild
blueberries or scoop fresh
grounds from can to filter. Each day
rolls over her like a thick
fog. She smells, hears—even
tastes—as if for the first
time, fumbling like a baby doe.
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The exhaustion in this poem is real for me Linda. His exquisite dirt embedded fingers gone is perhaps the most mysterious bit, that I love. Each day rolls over her like thick fog indeed. It’s almost like burial. Brava.
I love this. It really shows how grief changes so much about how we experience everyday life. The shift from talking about the dog to talking about the woman with the words “she can’t surrender” threw me off the first time, but upon reading it again I really like that that line can apply to either of them.
The title really works
and you are, as ever
always, amazing.
This one is real and
detailed and life.
Yes !
the wilderness of solitude..
nice work here
I love the detail and all the lines that circle in desolation.
This Poem is firing on all cylinders, sonically and in its precise kine and detail. I really enjoyed it.
I love the details in this. The dog’s pink tongue, dirt embedded fingers. Very nice.
Men in snakeboots are so hot, ain’t they? No wonder you miss em. 😉 Seriously this is beautiful.
I had to Google snakeboots to see what they are made of and I found it strangely arousing. (Ugh, not really.)
😂
Lord Linda, this poem! Love the observation of nature as the eye picks up on the world going on despite the grief – the cicadas doing their cicada business, the dog, the rabbit in their time-honored roles and there – the left behind, the desolate- sits at the window, grieving. Just beautiful.
Wonderful evocative details from the first stanza all the way through to the end.
What a wonderful poem. The imagery is so vivid and it conveys the sense of loss, manifest in these details, so intensely.
Despite the amount of vivid imagery, it isn’t even what stays with me (the heaviest). I agree with Manny; it is the emotional tenor, questions that hang barely beyond my full understanding. Regardless, “firing on all cylinders” was a good way to encompass the whole, Shaun.
Chiming in to say this is wonderful, Linda. Not only the details (which are amazing) but the measured pace of the piece: I’d trust this voice to lead me anywhere.
Your poems are a delight, a life lesson, an inspiration!
This poem. Yes. Yes. Yes. What beauty you create. Thank you for sharing this.
Linda, great details.
Like it so much—couplets and imagery and story!