American Sentence LXXXVII
Woman strokes flat belly, rocks a lullaby, heart skips like banjo bones.
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Woman strokes flat belly, rocks a lullaby, heart skips like banjo bones.
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I copied “banjo bones” but the little blue thing grabbed the whole poem…..lol
So I will say my phone says
Yes 😀
😂 Thanks, Coleman!
exquisite Pam
Thanks, Manny!
Holy smokes, this is devastating.
Yep.
Banjo bone. Love it.
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Oh, this is brilliant, Pam! So much packed into this tiny sentence. Wow!
Thanks, H.A.!
Wow. So good.
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Pam, you can say a great deal in a few words.
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Don’t know how you do it but I admire your skill!
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Rhythms of rhythms here: of musical flow in 17 syllables, of life, of nature. Worlds contained in this one sentence
Ahhh, you speak my hope realized Thanks!
The heart skipping says it all. Nice one, Pam!
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This took my breath away.
Thank you, Virginia!
How DO you do it? These never fail to stun me. Such images, and so short. Thank you.
I get on the train (imagination) in the morning and sit quiet and discover!
LOL “banjo bones” – Pam, you constantly intrigue and amaze!
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Haunting!
Thanks!
“Banjo bones” wins the day here…
But “flat belly” is a mystery…
Will these lines find a melody later this summer???
But “flat belly” is a mystery…think on it a bit….
And yes to a melody later this summer 🤞