American Sentence XXX
His hands break a promise, fumble for flask, to wet unquenchable thirst.
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His hands break a promise, fumble for flask, to wet unquenchable thirst.
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Not many people write about this. Thank you.
Appreciate your comment, Manny.
Nice, Pam – the first words draw me in, then comes “fumble for flask,” which is very good indeed.
Thank you. The form helps me pack as much punch as I can in each word.
I love how you say his hands break a promise–great, concise way to show that it’s the action that causes the betrayal.
Thank you, I was hoping to capture the struggle.