An American Sentence III
A man boards a train going somewhere, carries black and white photo close.
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A man boards a train going somewhere, carries black and white photo close.
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Could be the beginning or the end of something . . . I love the mystery, Pam.
Yep. How I felt when I wrote it!
Agree…it carries a sense of mystery. Other sentences might be found five stops further on.
Now there is an idea! Will ponder!
A whole movie just played out from this sentence…..and then scenes of movies I have seen where photos emerged in the hands of or from the pockets of characters and also how my great grandfather got on a train in the 1930’s but never made it to his destination…surely he had a photograph he kept close…I also imagined him when I read this too.
Thank you.
Thanks! And thank you for sharing about your great grandfather. The image I see in your words about him are compelling. Hope you write about it!