An American Sentence V
Old woman rocking memories burns bitter hearth, crunches old arguments.
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Old woman rocking memories burns bitter hearth, crunches old arguments.
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I love this form.
Thanks, Alissa! See note below.
Sorry folks, got up to tend to a task, came back submitted and then later realized I forgot to type the remainder! No more multi-tasking for me. Here it is in its entirety:
An American Sentence V
Old woman rocking memories burns bitter hearth, crunches old arguments.
Could be your American version of Ronsard’s sonnet to Helen
Hmmm. Yes, thank you!
like the verbs here.
Thanks! I love messing with verbs.
Your imagery is strong and impressive!
Thanks! This small form helps me dig deep.
I can see, hear, feel, and smell it all. Thanks, Pam.
Thanks, Nancy. Rocking memories came first then the rest followed.
Love this jewel, Pam!
Thanks, Ellen. Really getting into this form!
You are rocking the form, Pam!
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