artifice of the stream
Bewildered on what may briskly appear
mistily on the river I veer
moonlit with drear,
leaves fallen here
I steer unclear a pioneer on new frontier
suspicion and fear with timber fallen near
trodden I hear, the rustling of deer?
I peek to my rear until my neck becomes blear
wicked thoughts interfere,
will my mind persevere?
I pulled off to a clear and started my way through a garden
a gnome whose home was guarded had given me pardon
three trees twisted then hardened eerie they parted
bleary bark afflicted, discarded as life had departed
a dreary dark left uncharted as I left faintly hearted
but away with the thwarted,
a contorted suns beam appears here wiping my mind clear
creating a purple atmosphere that makes a premier in a time of year that I hold very dear
my kayak I steer into a violet sphere of hues vibrantly smeared,
altering me in extremes
I started witnessing awesome things,
like fall blossoming
or falling leaves offered as orange offerings to a
forest floor scene of color schemes i’ve only seen in dreams
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As one who loves music, I enjoyed the way one rhyme pattern shifted effortlessly into the next, making me feel as though I were walking behind you.
What gabby said! The crafting here is so evident. Nailed the ending and left us dreaming with you.
wow love these lines… barklove!
three trees twisted then hardened eerie they parted
bleary bark afflicted, discarded as life had departed
a dreary dark left uncharted as I left faintly hearted
I enjoyed it all, but loved this fun bit: “I pulled off to a clear and started my way through a garden
a gnome whose home was guarded had given me pardon…”
Brilliant use of rhyme throughout this poem! It’s so fun to read 🙂