At the soup kitchen
Claude’s* the one I look for weekly.
Big, sunburned, hair askew, taciturn.
I strain to hear his mumbled menu:
“coffee”
“what kind of soup?”
“ham-and-cheese”
—just that.
Prefers his coffee black.
Otherwise silent,
his bulk gentles the parking lot
where he squats,
a lump in nylon sleeping shell.
Once he unleashed a string of words—
soft technobabble all disjointed.
But mostly mute
until today:
I see him point to me and murmur,
“I want him to serve my soup.”
*Not his real name
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Wonderful poem
Thank you, Kevin…the incident just happened today. I was stunned, believe me–this is ‘way out of character for this man, who must have a lot more perking inside…somehow, we made some kind of connection along the way…
Wonderful feelings elicited from this story. Who knows what’s inside.
You’ve done a great job painting this picture and telling this story!
Thank you for writing this poem
Love:
his bulk gentles the parking lot
and
“I want him to serve my soup.”
Touching to know you are notice by those you serve selflessly
Thanks to you all!
“his bulk gentles the parking lot” reveals how you see him and your poem reveals that he knows ❤️
I love this one, Greg! Not only have you seen this man, but he’s also seen you! Such humanity.
Favorite lines:
his bulk gentles the parking lot
where he squats,