Aunt Ethel
What is it about things?
Keepsakes placed in drawers,
randomly, about the house–
shells, rocks, old buttons–
that you can hold
in your hand and feel:
the smoothness
the ridges
the thinness
the thickness
the edge
of things–
What is it?
That rock found at a creek
near Fuller Lake
when you lived in Pennsylvania
a lifetime ago,
the shell you found in South Carolina,
on a beach with your second husband,
another one–pink abalone on the inside,
darkest blue on the outside, a delicate mussel
from Star Island, pale green and cobalt
beach glass, a chip of heavy China from a ship.
And, that large brown button
that fell off your great aunt’s coat
as she boarded the train from Chicago
to Buffalo–you were ten. It was cold.
Before she tucked you into bed,
the night before,
she described what it was like
to board the Maid of the Mist,
buckling up in big yellow raincoats,
hearing the roar of the falls,
the great spray of Niagara,
clouding your eyes.
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Your poem’s opening question seems so innocent to me in its beginning and so powerful as its answers are found. The things you list as “keepsakes” seem valueless when presented without context, “random” beyond the arbitrary perhaps to the point of being meaningless.
Yet you feel them anyway. You hold them in your hands.
And the isolated, impatient repetition of the question strengthens the reader’s impression – for an instant – that any value these things may have must be so oblique as to deserve no effort to look for any meaning at all
But then your second listing breaks this tension in the poem. You excavate the meaning of each of those things so delicately and tenderly as you attach them to moments in a life lost to time. The feel in the heart of things gathered and kept by a real person with real presence and feelings.
It’s so great that, in the last stanza, you deliver to the reader a standpoint at which to receive the wistful affections and tender grief you express here. I find this poem so moving. So beautiful. I just love it.
Oh thank you for liking this as much as I do. I think it is ok to love a poem that is your own!
I really enjoyed this piece and how you describe these memories
I love this. The details are great and I can relate so much. My whole house is full of treasures like that. Nice poem!
The scenes here feel so real and lived-with. I also really liked the list in the first stanza, how it stretched out the keepsakes. Wonderful sentiment and just a lovely poem!