Beach Poem #1
Does everyone, sitting on the seashore,
imagine the horizon tilt toward them,
the ocean rising out of its pit
sheer in an upward, skyward lift
a solid block of water, a wall, really
traveling at 80 mph, coming toward them
bringing the roil of wind and sand
the seabirds spiraling along above it
the kelp tumbling along the low shelf
the fish surprised at how high the swell
has lifted them in its traveling
in its water stacked and higher until it
threatens to cover not just the shoreline but
the line of houses beyond the shore and
the town beyond the houses and
the highway beyond the town and
the old abandoned gas station and
the motor lodge and
the peach stand beyond that
or is it just me?
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I do, too, at times
From ocean rising from its pit to peach pit 🙂 I like it! Looking forward to Beach Poem #2!
I’m also looking forward to Beach POem #2. You sustain the idea of this poem beautifully!
I love this, Liz. Imaginative and well crafted.
Very much like this Liz!
Love the building crescendo created by all the peaceful images about to get smacked down!