Bed Time Story
The night unwinds. And I’m alone.
Below, shadows like rabbits
slip from holes at the terminus
of lines of sunken dirt
to play.
I sit with a cold can
in my hand, wondering if they, too, smell smoke
where there is no fire
within sight.
How do you say goodnight
without an ear to hear?
You close your eyes and breathe the spectral scent
of her, lifted—phantom wisps—from your clothes.
You feel the black-silk-press of her mouth against
yours, still lingering. Still lingering.
You taste the sharp, sweet remnant of her—
brush of fingertip, scratch of nail—
like a rune drawn across your lips.
The Night unwinds—the day withdrawing
without a word—
so many things far away;
so many things left undone.
But the night yet unwinds,
whispering,
whispering,
some things burn
without sight.
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I can feel the loneliness,longing
Whoops, I didn’t finish. The thing posted mid-thumb tap. Yes, I can feel.tge loneliness and longing. I can also feel the heat of the hidden fire.
Both very very present.
But content that fire does have an outlet through which to breathe.
Beautiful, original writing. I love “spectral scent” and “black-silk-press of her mouth.”
Thank you, Chelsie 🙂
Only words I could find to describe
tumbling into the land of sleep.
before the time of man.
nice work!
Absolutely 🖤
The piercing chill I feel:
my dead wife’s comb, in our bedroom,
under my heel
–Buson
Mmm, that was a great frisson moment.
Yessssss
The night unwinds. And I’m alone…some things burn without sight.
So good
Had a teacher once who made us read our first and final lines. Said the entire poem should be able to be felt in just those two. Don’t know if I totally agree—but it’s a good test and exercise.
Thank you 💙
Wow ! So good on the page.
Current and personal.
Wonderful.
Thank you, sir!