before and after
plan to
slip back
into certain places
most will
outlast- longer
on the page
your body
and blood
control the day
your heart
make take
it away
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plan to
slip back
into certain places
most will
outlast- longer
on the page
your body
and blood
control the day
your heart
make take
it away
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“Your body/and blood/control the day”
Why come to think of it, yes they do! More curious little swatches here.
!
I like the way you adhere
to second person
…..this, a powerful, lyrical
love poem
Was-is-willbe
I like this one.
I really enjoyed this–each stanza is really great
You get so much across in just a few brush strokes. Nicely done!
should be ‘may take’ not ‘make take’ whoops..
I actually read it as “may take” and did not notice!
Well done.