black
dog cough along the path
fireflies
gone-
birdcall covers the sky
up to
swirls of white
four dried petals- open fire
and fall
full pink purple
black butterfly
up high
(up hollow)
blued rays through grey
white waves
over poles and wires
under buzzard circles.
lyrical
from dog cough to buzzard circles
Yes, lyrical, and love how you use only the necessary words.
You inspire me to write a little more sparsely. The spaces between the words are important too!
thanks. do you know about crown shyness?
the space between the tops of trees…
Wonderful compressed images!