dog cough along the path
birdcall covers the sky
swirls of white
four dried petals- open fire
full pink purple
blued rays through grey
over poles and wires
under buzzard circles.
from dog cough to buzzard circles
Yes, lyrical, and love how you use only the necessary words.
You inspire me to write a little more sparsely. The spaces between the words are important too!
thanks. do you know about crown shyness?
the space between the tops of trees…
Wonderful compressed images!