blue
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in its category:
Why is blue
universal
for sorrow?
What if
your sorrow
tastes more
like a mother
watching their child
fade away
of starvation?
flavorless
except
the salt
in tears
Or
What if it smells
of burned flesh
after found
sitting
in a bomb’s way
or
is it felt like
the searing of skin
flashed by shrapnel
on your way to fill
your tin with food?
is this blue
like sorrow
red like anger
or maybe only
the whites of eyes
filled with greed
4 thoughts on "blue"
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I really like how this poem grows, getting heavier and heavier. Very nice work.
Beautiful- that last line is perfect-“the whites of eyes
filled with greed”
I found this poem compelling throughout and with a powerful ending.
Powerful piece. The form lines the page and builds the impact too.