Breaking Camp
I point—over a high ridge
I’ve spotted a hawk turning on a silk
air current, effortless as your warm breath
against my neck. You hand me steaming
coffee, black, and its rich color reminds me
of the night, the heat it held
and the secrets our bodies shared
within it. But you are tired of the darkness
that drags me down in full
daylight. I want to live as fluidly
as this hawk, feel for myself
the slip and soar, pull
into my lungs the strength and lightness
of the air all around me. When I imagine
contentment, I picture feathers
shielding against a hard rain,
a river,
deep roots,
a quiver of straight arrows.
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wow this poem vibrates on a steady internal hum that makes the reading of it as straight and seamless as that arrow at the end. nicely done!
Great imagery Jasmine!
Beautiful! Perfect ending. Birds do seem to have it figured out.
What Liz said!
Such tight imagery—I agree with Liz!
Apparently Liz beat us all 😂
But her wording, that thrum, is legit.
Especially, for some reason, this bit:
“you are tired of the darkness
that drags me down in full
daylight.”
Maybe just where I am at the moment. Or that perfect enjambment.
I really enjoyed this poem
love last line
“fluidly” spoke to me — and “quiver” is an amazing word choice. This poem soars!
a quiver of straight arrows.
Perfect final line.
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